First time poet =p?

"a candle flicker in the dark...in the depth and darkness of my heart a flame grows ever brighter...wandering through the maze that is my mind where i will walk until the end of time a flame burns ever hotter...flying across a great plane of ice and cold where the thoughts and memories of old of old are sent to die...the flames break through the ice ...growing ever taller...ever bigger...until my body is ablaze...in the far reaches of my soul amidst the burning fire and coal...there stands a young boy impervious to the heat and scorched earth under his tired feet...with a flicker of a smile he lifts his feet off the ground and shoots upward bound on wings of black...he breaks through the smoke free to fly under these blue skys...forever free..."